What in education is out dated, like the wristwatch."a single function device."?
According to Ken Robinson, Education is an evolution instead of a revolution. We as humans see one direct path, we don’t see the big picture, the bigger picture being that education is not for everyone, and each person makes their own path toward education if they choose too or not. Revolution shall give the generation now a better way of learning.
We as a generation
don’t acknowledge what we are good at; we just follow everyone else and what
they are doing. Nowadays people just like to get through life they don’t see
any real enjoyment in life. That’s no way to live life you need to enjoy
yourself, live the moment. With this revolution everything will change, we
would no longer ignore our talents and show improvement, Change in our
generation is a much-needed thing. The change will include transforming
education in to what it once was and yet many times better.
Everyone has
forgotten what education really means. Education was about finding what you
loved to do, what you wanted to pursue. Education in this generation has been
manipulated into a competition. A competition that has narrowed our views where
we only think about how long will it takes us to transfer and what classes I
need to take to make that happen in little as possible. Education will no longer
be about who has a better GPA, the better grade, or who got in to what college.
It will now be about what you want and not what others think is best for you.
Your second and third paragraphs are really strong because they start with a clear stance. If they fit, you should definitely use them in your essay. Good Work!
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